Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Bunny Ch. 21

If you haven't read part 20, do so here. Or you can start from the beginning.

"The dumbbells are working," Brandon announces as he walks through the door.


I'm at the kitchen counter, preparing a sandwich. "Pardon?"

"The dumbbells," he restates, gesturing towards my bare arms. "I can see a difference."


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6 comments:

  1. For some reason your writing style seems different... Still a good chapter, but it doesn't read quite the same.

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  2. AHH. So excited :) I love this so much, continue this. Also, will you continue Sandalwood? I love that story too!

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  3. Yes I agree with Rosenkrantz, your style has changed slightly, but I'm too involved not to care at this moment. Love the story and crossing fingers and toes just in case.

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  4. Of course the tone of the story will change, since Bunny is changing! Loved the ending. //Malin

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  5. I think I'm stuck in my somewhat nostalgic bubble from the start of Bunny back in 2009 as a cute little bottom, the story will never be quite the same as it was back then for me, but I suppose the story has to change, or it would turn into a stale BDSM fantasia which Bunny can never can escape from.

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  6. I recognize this chapter from earlier times! So excited, the next few chapters are my favorite IIRC.

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