Saturday, February 16, 2013

Bunny Ch. 19

If you haven't read part 18, do so here. Or you can start from the beginning.
I had expected to feel lighter as I walked away, unburdened, carefree, but instead it is as though the sun had dimmed. My heart hurts, my chest hurts, my head hurts, and my eyes are stinging.

My feet take me to Brandon's apartment. He's grinning from ear to ear when he opens the door, but his expression quickly turns to concern when he sees my face.

"What's wrong?" he asks, pulling me inside.

"I don't know," I say hollowly. I can tell he wants to say something, a lot of things, but he shuts his mouth.


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6 comments:

  1. ohmigosh. That was a great chapter, very funny. I appreciate the fact that you didn't shy away from Tucker's grief, as well. A lot of people don't realize that even with an abusive relationship, you feel grief and pain when you leave it. Maybe moreso, because you're so..trained..to stay where you are.

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  2. So cute(: Tucker is adorable. Thanks for another great chapter.

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  3. I only have one problem with your stories. The chapters have an unfortunate tendency to end way to soon... Now I have to wait for he next one and I am not a very patient person. Thanks for a great read! //Malin

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  4. What's with the messed up grammar? Tut Tut Tut Acerbicscribbler, you're slacking!

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  5. Oh how I love this series,So glad that finally Tucker left and I loved the humor in this chapter/Pokadot

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  6. I am so amazingly glad I found this story!! I read it on literotica ages ago and was sad to see it was taken down... just tried my luck googling some keywords and found it again. Re-read the whole story, still love it.

    This chapter in particular was hilarious, and very cute. I also like that Tucker and Brandon aren't fucking like bunnies (excuse the pun) at every turn, as I feel many authors would've taken it that way.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

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