Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Watching Him Back 4.5

The first part of chapter 4 is here and 4.4 is here.

Crispin and I don’t get to hang out much in the week before prom. There’s some brief fondling in the art classrooms after school, but all his girlfriends want him to shop with them and plan for fucking after parties, and I’m busy trying to figure out how I’m going to take a cock up my ass for the first time in my life.

I wonder if Crispin did all the same kind of research before he came over that first time. All the sanitary and safety issues—I have a new respect for the porn stars who manage to do this all day without prolapsed anuses right and left. What did he had time to do in the bathroom, then, when he jumped up and was all, "Gotta go get ready!" I wonder?

My getting ready might have been different from his, but I think I've psyched myself up enough that I'm at least prepared for when Crispin walks in at 11:30 on prom night. I greet him with a wolf whistle.
"Da-yum, Viera," I say appreciatively, and motion for him to turn around. He obliges. "I like that ass in them pants."

Crispin smiles shyly. He really does look like a pint-size GQ model with his velvet tuxedo jacket, slim-fitting pants, and his hair somehow pinned up so that it doesn’t seem long enough to reach his back. I guess I won’t be pulling on it tonight.

“People are dumb,” I say without really thinking.

Read the rest at https://reamstories.com/acerbicscribbler

10 comments:

  1. You are a genius! I have been a fan for a long time and this is one of my favorites of yours. I just had to comment on how much I love the chemistry between Crispin and Aaron. I was so excited when I saw this update. I'm almost patiently waiting for the next part.

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  2. Hahahha that was hilarious! I loved it:)

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  3. Oh my God, that was not at all what I expected. rofl That was brilliant, and I was so happy to see an update for this story! I love all of your writing, but this story....This is my favorite.

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  4. Two updates in one month? You are spoiling us rotten! Thank you! //Malin

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  5. I love these guys! Can't wait for you to update! Please soon!

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  6. I love how Aaron is falling in love with Crispin and doesn't even realize it. This story is so cute and lovely and it has a lot more depth than I realized at first glance.

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  7. When are you gonna up date???

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  8. Love it so much! Found your story recently on Literotica and saw a comment about your blog. Of course I had to track it down and read the rest of it, which I hope you continue soon, because it is absolutely fantastic. Your characters are so great, the humor is awesome, and I really hope they end up together since they're so perfect.

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  9. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS......its been a long time.

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  10. It's five years later, and I still check this blog for updates on this story. I, hope you finish it one day, but even if you don't, I just wanted to say that this story holds a special place in my heart and I'll probably still be here in another five years rereading these parts.

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